Designer Bats

Bats sketching in the dusky sky
with their charcoal wings;
they fly in circles,
drawing ribbons and curves.
As if guided by Wright,
they’re designing
another Guggenheim
in my back yard.

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3 Responses to Designer Bats

  1. zumpoems says:

    This is great! Another 5 stars poem! Deserves to be published!

  2. zumpoems says:

    Came back to this to re-read after reading several of your other poems, some much longer. Some of your poems are definitely like works of art. I don’t know if this one is intended to have any deeper meaning, but the surface meaning is expressed perfectly.

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